"The Braves Arise "
My favorite day… dream
by Shyan Koul
(Age: 7 years)
My favorite day is when I woke up and I was the king of the world. I was in a palace with a room and lots of trophies. I looked out from one of sixty-three windows and saw people bowing to me. I never felt better. I found servants in another room. I told them to get water and they did.
I was married to the nicest and prettiest queen available, Queen Emily. We had one boy and one girl. They always did their work. Our kids loved studies. My family and I were very nice.
We were the richest family ever in all humanity. We got everything from our kingdoms. I had gold everywhere. I saw all the animals in real life, even the endangered ones.
Everyone liked me and I had 5,000 friends. I knew that I was great. I was always happy.
*Shyan Koul is a 7 year old, 2nd Grade student from Andover, Massachusetts, U.S.A. His interests are story reading, music and travel.
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Dear Shanu, I loved it. May your dreams come true and I hope i am one among your 5000 friends so that I can have some of your gold. Love , Sanjay Uncle
Added By Sanjay Kaul
Hey my little Chum, You have started thinking and dreaming big.You got even married with a beautiful girl without our participation.It is not fair because we wanted to give her some nice Indian gifts on your wedding so that she could love you more.Pass on our affections to your cute wife.
Added By pushkar ganjoo
I wish your dream come true and you should be known as Shanu The Great!!!
Added By Chandra Ganju
Dear Shyan, How come we both want the same things? Arun
Added By Arun Koul
FANTASTIC. A VIRTUAL REALITY ARMAN IS IMAGINING. ARMAN IS A GENIUS. HIS TALENT NEEDS TO BE PROTECTED & NURTURED BY HIS FAMILY & FREINDS. DOES HE REFER TO ''KASHMIR'' AS A HOME IN THE END? I WONDER HIS IDEAS AT A TINY AGE OF TEN. HE MUST NEVER HAVE VISITED KASHMIR. MY BOUNTIFUL BLESSINGS & GOOD WISHES FOR HIM. MAY HE ACHIEVE HIS MOTTO & GOAL. GOD BLESS HIM.
Added By DR. TEJ.K. KAUL
I loved your story! It's so cool!!! I hope one day your dream will come true! Keep writing more stories Shayan!
Added By Meera Bhan